Wednesday 27 August 2014

I want the Hurricanes to come to our school. A piece of persuasive writing by Tobey

I want the hurricanes to come our school
We all love the hurricanes and wish that they would come to our school. Well I hope that could come true, I'm here to persuade the hurricanes to come to our school.


Now for all the times I’ve been at hutt central school us year sixes have never had the hurricanes come to our school. They are a bunch of awesome people with a good influence . At Hutt Central School we have lots of hurricanes fans.


Now we all know that the the hurricanes have awesome skills and we want to develop their awesome skills. we know that the hurricanes have awesome skills but maybe we could show them our pretty good skills. Maybe at the end of the day our rugby team that will face wellesley college maybe could face the hurricanes in a game of ruggers which would be awesome but i doubt that would happen.


If the rugby game didn’t we could have back ups, like a round of challenges and they would be, who can eat the weetbix and who can kick the furthest from the start of the field to the end of the field.
so this is when we have to give into them. in return we will give them a top of the hurricanes (2014) with hutt central school badge printed on the top.


so im here to persuade the hurricanes to come to Hutt Central School.


by Tobey room 5


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