Wednesday, 27 August 2014

School Makeover - Piece of Persuasive Writing by Mia


School Makeover
Dear Mr Downman.


Although not everybody would agree, I want to argue that we should makeover the whole school and playgrounds.


I have several reasons for arguing for this point of view. My first reason is most of the classes have either stained or smelly carpet that looks old.


A further reason is, our school would look so good, it would encourage parents to bring their kids to our school.


Furthermore children are always complaining that they want new playgrounds. I can’t blame them because we have had the playgrounds for ages now!


Therefore, although some people will argue that it will be too expensive but we can fundraise! I mean it doesn’t have to happen right now! It could happen in a few years time.

I think I have shown that we should makeover the whole school and playgrounds!

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